
The limpid waters
frolicked in the evening light
and lapped at the foothills
edging the heavens
Where the horizon
hemmed the surface of the deep
as it turned to indigo
beneath a mountainous sky
A sky of impenetrable darkness
which brooded over the slumbering realm
As the seas assumed a metallic lustre
shimmering in emerald green
In the light of an ivory moon
dangling low in the midnight firmament
~ d.a.simpson ~
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Gorgeous 💕👏👏👏💕
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Your description of the water and the moon’s intimacy paints the picture of a jewel. You definitely did a great job using vocabulary that paints the picture of light shining just slightly but in a mesmerizing way. I especially love your usage of the word “limpid”. It’s a new word for me, and starting the Poem off with that word just made it much more attractive
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So beautiful lines 👌👌❤️
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What fabulous imagery! I love the bold opening that evokes an immediate picture and the changes that flow through this piece to the ending. ❤
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Your poem flows beautifully! Such a smooth transition from one line to the next. 🌺 🌸
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Many thanks for your kind words.
I’m delighted that you enjoyed this piece 💜✨
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My profound gratitude to you for your kind appreciation
I’m delighted that this poem resonated with you in this way 🌺🌷
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Many thanks 🌺✨
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Very many thanks for reading and for your kind words of appreciation. I’m delighted that this poem resonated with you in this way
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Of course. Thank you, once again.
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My pleasure!
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Truly beautiful! ❣️
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Thank you
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